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Charting the plot of "La noche
boca arriba"
by Mary Becker Quinn, Spanish and Portuguese
"Reading and Literary Analysis"
(Spanish 25) is the first literature class required in the Spanish department.
Because it is a course organized by genre, the students' command of literary
form is essential. Equally essential, therefore, is the instructor's ability
to demonstrate why such knowledge is vital to the study of literature.
In the prose unit, for example, the students are required to learn the
standard elements of a plot: exposition, development, suspense, turning
point, climax, and denouement. I developed the following exercise, based
on Julio Cortázar's story "La noche boca arriba," to show them
that this knowledge can prove crucial for the complete analysis and understanding
of this specific story, and more generally to show that there indeed frequently
exists a fundamental relationship between theme and form in literature.
"La noche boca arriba" begins
with a man's motorcycle accident and subsequent hospitalization. When
he is drugged for an operation, we enter his dream world, which becomes
a parallel storyline. In the fantasy realm he is not a man of the 20th
century, but part of the "moteca" tribe (a play in Spanish on the word
for motorcycle) who is being pursued by the Aztecs. But as the story continues,
the dream states become longer and more vivid, and in the end, as the
"moteca" is about to become a human sacrifice to Aztec gods (and the man
of the 20th century, we presume, is about to be operated upon), the protagonist
realizes that in fact fantasy is reality, and the dream world was that
of the 20th century. The story ends with the protagonist's inability to
wake up (and thus return to see his hospital surroundings) and his subsequent
death in the Aztec temple.
The parallel storylines at
first simply seem to provide a dual opportunity to chart plot. And so,
for the first twenty minutes of the class, the students are placed in
small groups (3-4 students each) during which they complete the provided
worksheet. The sheet has two columns with the headings "Realidad" (real
world) and "Sueño" (dream world) and under each column are listed
the 6 elements of plot. What is the exposition of the "real" world and
what is the exposition of the "dream" world? Etc. I then write the plot
elements on the board and have them come up and fill in their various
ideas. As a class we discuss and come to conclusions about their differing
answers regarding exposition, development, suspense and turning point
in both storylines. But the exercise becomes more interesting (and, indeed,
more instructive) when the students reach the climax and denouement sections.
For here the students realize that the two storylines have collapsed into
one. Cortázar has woven the parallel stories so tightly together,
that the "real" and the "dream" sections have the same climax and the
same denouement. (The protagonist cannot wake-up [climax] and will therefore
be sacrificed and die a "moteca" [denouement]). Cortázar, who blurred
the line between reality and dream in so many other ways throughout the
story, has also blurred it formally in the plot. At the end of the exercise,
it is apparent that the students have understood its objective because
they must leave blank the last two segments of plot in the "reality" column.
Cortázar's purpose and mine are rendered perfectly clear.
For the last few minutes of
class, I stress to the students that Cortázar has manipulated the
plot in order to support his theme. By showing the interconnectedness
of theme and form, the students begin to understand why a purely subjective
response to literature (their frequent first impulse) is not adequate.
And, far from an isolated exercise, learning how theme and form relate
is how one begins to learn to read literature.
NOMBRE:___________________________
Cortázar: "La noche
boca arriba"
La realidad real world El sueño dream
world
La exposición
exposition
El desarrollo
development
El suspenso
suspense
El punto decisivo
turning point
El clímax
climax
El desenlace
denouement
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